5 Easy Ways to Improve the Joy of Academic Writing

It was 2019 when I was asked to give a workshop on creative writing for PhD students at the University of Amsterdam. In retrospect, this was the start of the journey that has lead me to become a creative entrepreneur and to develop a series of workshops, such as Creative Writing for Academics and Storytelling for Grant Applicants.

This blogpost invites you on that journey, providing you with five tips to explore how to integrate creative writing into your academic work.

Curious about the foundation of this work? In my article Doing Academia Differently, I tell the story of what pushed me to explore creative writing as a tool in academic writing.

Tastes like more? I’m offering multi-sessions workshops for academic writers of all disciplines; workshops specifically designed for grant applicants; as well as personal coaching.

The power of creative writing

Creative writing is an effective tool to catch readers’ attention while grounding them into scenes. It is also a tool that helps develop a narrative even though you may think that your work is not a story—it is.

Academic authors who insert creative writing into their texts provide their readers with splashes of sensory experience. They draw their readers into the world that they researched; they take them by the hand, cracking the codes of conventions to help them enter some of the most obscure areas of our brain, of our bodies, and of our societies. Smells come to life; colours become pointers for grounding the reader into a scene; the light signals specific moments in time; shapes arise, taking the form of human and non-human characters.

With creative writing, an author is no longer only telling, but showing what their research led them to discover, and what that means for our understanding of the world. Creative writing endows a text with more space and more freedom for readers to appropriate it. A creative text doesn’t tell the reader how to read; it creates a setting from which subtexts emerge, there for the reader to immerse themselves in an experience.

Tip 1. Ground your reader into a scene

A rule of thumb to get your reader immersed in your material is to ground them into a scene, again and again. A scene is like a zoomed-in photograph; it pauses on a specific moment at a specific place, giving cues for the reader to experience that moment. The broken white colour of the wall, the smell of coffee lingering around, the tic-tac-tic-tic-tac of fingers pressing laptops keys, the moist eyes of the dog looking at you while you write. Scenes transport the reader into another space and time.

A scene could be close to you, a moment during the research process, such as when you open a dusty, classified box in the archive; your first encounter with a respondent; your sensations when arriving nearby the embassy hosting a political refugee. But a scene can also be about something more distant. The setting of a speech, the atmosphere of the parliament, the mood of a crowd, the frame of a report.

Not all your writing needs to be staged as a scene. But inserting a scene regularly will make the reader come with you along your research journey. If you lose them along the way, they’ll find you back at your old woden desk, by the window, or at the river side. Just allow them to be on your side, wherever you are.

Tip 2. Evoke all the senses

Have you written your first scene already? Great! Now, check how many senses your scene evokes. The more senses, the stronger the scene becomes. Was the coffee bitter? Which noise came through? What kind of light shone on the walls? Was the room smelling of wooden floors, or was the building sweating with concrete off-gassing? Was the air crisp, thick, warm? Make your reader taste, hear, see, smell, and touch what you have been tasting, hearing, seeing, smelling and touching. Or even better: steer your reader’s experience by evoking those senses that will make them concentrate on the details you want them to see. Each sensory detail is a tool to attract their attention, paving the way for your theoretical and analytical claim to land naturally.

Tip 3. Keep the language as simple as possible

Academic writers are notorious for throwing expensive words at each corner of their sentences. Sometimes those words have their purpose; they bring in nuances or technical details that couldn’t be mentioned otherwise. Although they have qualities in common, metaphors and metonymies are not the same, and identifying a synecdoche can at times be helpful. But the most powerful texts remain those where jargon has been replaced by everyday language.

Your best ideas will especially land if you can convert them into simple and elegant images.

Take Virginia Woolf’s credo for instance: “A woman must have money and a room of her own if she is to write fiction.” No one can claim not to understand her claim because of the language. And yet, her sentence shelters a powerful criticism of patriarchal societies, which has resonated worldwide for nearly 100 years.

Tip 4. Establish who and what are the characters of your story

While scenes should be cornerstones of your writing on a micro level, your narrative will especially thrive if you establish a conversation between different characters throughout your entire piece. A character can be human: yourself as the researcher, a respondent, a historical figure; but it can also be a non-human actor: a building, a document, a plant, a concept, a theory.

To get you going, here is a list of question that may spark a beginning: how do your characters feel? Are they introvert, extravert, complacent, stubborn, conservative, expanding? How do they make you feel and why? What would you like to know about them that you don’t know yet (think wild, imagine they are human)? Is it easy to communicate with them, why, why not, what do they keep secret? From experience, I noticed that these questions are particularly generative when your charachter is a non-human one.

The point is to establish dynamic relationships between the various characters in your work. As Helen Sword suggests in her fantastic writing guide Stylish Academic Writing, you may want to play around and copy classic plot structures, such as the murder mystery plot where the researcher searches for clues, follows a few hints, and applies their deductive power to solve the enigma. Or such as the Pride and Prejudice structure, where two seemingly incompatible concepts are brought into a single conceptual space, where they flirt, dance, argue and laugh to the point that they will never leave each other ever again. For more examples of possible plot structures, see Helen Sword’s chapter “The Story Net.”

Characters and their relationships will help you create focus into your writings; they will allow you to play around with points of view; and they will help the reader experience the different facets of your truth.

Tip 5. Work on the overall plot of your piece

Every writer experience at some point a writer’s block. I remember working on the introduction of my book and feeling completely lost in the myriads of possibilities to tell why I wrote the history of denaturalization law in the first place. I was saved by applying a very simple exercise: what was the story of that book? What happened? Why? And where was this going next? Instead of writing full paragraphs in all their details, I wrote a two-page sketch of my introduction plot. This allowed me to visualize the structure of the narrative. The rest came naturally.

In the end, every writer is a storyteller. Developing the overall arch of your story will help you find focus and directions, paving the way to insert scenes, sensory details, and character relationships.

Conclusion: From research to communication, and back again

Not only is creative writing an attractive means of communication for reaching a broader audience, but it is also a way to investigate the most complex aspects of our subjects of analysis.

Try it out, and you’ll be surprised by how creative writing doesn’t only change the way you write, but also the way you see and understand your own material in the first place. Five easy ways to start are: 1. Ground your reader into scenes; 2. Evoke as many senses as possible; 3. Keep the language as simple as possible; 4. Establish who and what your characters are; 5. Work on the overall plot of your piece.

As one of the participants in Amsterdam elegantly summarized: “When you are stuck, go and play.” A lesson that is not only valid for writing, but for life in general.

Need some help in starting to play?

New Season of Creation

Dear readers,

It has been a year since my article “Doing Academia Differently” was published. Writing the article had been a transformative experience. It inspired me to design my workshops Creative Writing for Academics, and it pushed me to start working as a creative entrepreneur, staying in touch with academia, but from a different position.

While the article was finding its audience, and after I had had the chance to experience the power of making space for researchers to explore their writings in new ways, I experienced one of the most severe winters of my life and had to shut down for a couple of months.

Reading Katherine May’s Wintering helped me make sense of that experience. I loved the way she pays attention to nature’s capacity to adapt to extreme colds. From afar, it then may look as if nothing happens. But when we look closely, we see all kinds of activities going on: burgeons have formed on bare branches, still closed, but ready to burst open when spring comes. Hibernating animals breathe differently, lower their body temperature, change their chemical balance.

Nature doesn’t stop when winter comes. It adapts; it transforms.

So did I, breathing through extreme nauseas, dizziness, and complete exhaustion that came with pregnancy. I entered a subterranean kingdom, a kingdom where time and space function differently. A kingdom of silence. A kingdom of untold stories.

The extremes of being in a woman body is full of silences and is such an untold story. An untold story that I may start writing, bit by bit, as I resurface into the world. Revisiting what it means to be a mother; revisiting what I do for work; finding new patterns in search of equilibriums.

What’s coming up:

And so, we are now a year later, as I gear towards a new season of creation.

These are a sample of activities I look forward to, and I hope to meeting you along the way:

New workshop for grant applicants:

  • Thanks to a request from Université Saint Louis Brussels, I’ve developed a new writing workshop for grant applicants. The workshop provides tools to uncover the research proposal’s narrative, one of those tricks that tilt a proposal on top.

Sounds like something for you or for your institute? Contact me!

Creative Writing for Academics:

  • I’ll continue providing series of workshop Creative Writing for Academics, with sessions already book for various institutes at the University of Amsterdam, Nijmegen University, and Queen Mary University of London.

These workshops make space for researchers to explore a diverse and creative pallet of writing styles in their academic writing practice. They are open to all disciplines, and welcome researchers from PhD students to full professors.

Sounds like something you need? Contact me!

New concept emerging: The Writing Lab:

  • I’m brooding on a new concept: The Writing Lab, a space of regular meetings for researchers to explore their writing in new, creative ways.

Sounds like something you want? Contact me!

Social Dreaming and Poetry:

  • Following on previous projects on Social Dreaming, I’ll contribute some of my poems to an artistic exhibition on Social Dreaming held at the Tavistock Institute of Human Relations in London. Details will follow, but I already know that the opening is on November 17, 2022.

Stay in touch!

Regards,

Marie

Here is an antidote to feeling blue about holiday times

It was such a joy to reconnect with friends and colleagues after the holiday. But I was saddened to witness how many of us are filled with apprehension to start the new academic year. The holiday hasn’t been short, but the pandemic weights on everyone’s shoulder, and there is so much to do.

I have an antidote: Inject creative practice into your work.

When I designed my workshop Creative Writing for Academics, I noticed how injecting creativity into our research and writing practice yields power. It brings fun and joy into our work. It unleashes energy to write. It connects us with our intimate stories. And it brings us in touch with the profound questions that inspired us from the start.

Yet making space for creativity isn’t easy. And this is why I keep offering these workshops:

To make space for you to experience a moment of writing where hands-on exercises not only boost your writing practice, but also make you experience your research and writing in a fresh, honest, and relational way.

Join us! During this two-session-workshop, you will invite sensory details on the page, turning your research into a vibrant text where data, concepts, and theories become characters who take you on a whole new journey.

Photo by Neil Thomas on Unsplash

Doing Academia Differently: Workshop Creative Writing for Academics 17 & 24 Sept 13.00 – 16.30 CEST

Make space to explore a diverse and creative pallet of writing styles in your academic writing practices.

The choices we make when we write have profound effects on the reality that we observe. Giving an account of our observations requires a multitude of styles of writing for achieving the greatest accuracy. Finding the most accurate style of writing for a particular purpose sometimes implies letting go of a seemingly neutral style of writing, instead embracing a plurality of voices, such as staging a dialogue or exploring a more poetic style.

In this introductory workshop spread over two sessions, we practice writing scenesworking with sensory details, defining the main characters driving the story of our work, and staging conversations between them. All sessions are designed around sample texts, and include on-the-spot writing exercises. There will be time for peer-review, and we will take time to reflect on what it takes to make space for creativity within our academic work.

What people say about the workshop:

I tried a few similar workshops recently, and I find Marie’s ones by far the best: they are not only extremely helpful but also a pleasure to do.

Chiara, associate professor

This course has inspired me to develop my own writing style in my papers. It helped me to be creative and productive (for it makes one want to write!), and it has given me perspective regarding the use of poetic, experiential and metaphorical language in crafting academic texts.

Rodante, PhD candidate

Resorting to our body feelings and sensations, bringing them to our awareness while entering a scholarly conversation, opens up a spectrum of alternatives to engage in discussion. Thank you for your expert guidance, so human, that allowed me to feel at ease while exploring “the feeling” of theoretical argumentation. Your workshop contributes to awareness in academic writing, to taking responsibility for choices, to freedom, to integrity. A real eye opener.

Marina, PhD candidate

Marie’s expertise lies in the fact that she used to be a highly successful academic, and is now both an inspired writer and a gifted teacher. This combination is what makes her creative writing for academics courses so inspiring!

Ida, PhD candidate

I’m grateful for participating in Marie’s workshops. The creative writing sessions have helped me enter the scenes of my research, and to shape these worlds while I write with all my senses. Marie’s prompts facilitate a somatic opening for engaging with my data in ways that my whole body is there; writing-as-inquiry from this space enhances fieldwork memory, feelings, creativity, and clarity. It has been a joyful experience to learn on-the-spot techniques for doing this. After these sessions, I wanted to keep writing! Thank you Marie for sharing your gifts with us. 

Nadia, PhD researcher

Introductory workshop Creative Writring for Academics 8 & 15 June

Make space to explore a diverse and creative pallet of writing styles in your academic writing practices.

The choices we make when we write have profound effects on the reality that we observe. Giving an account of our observations requires a multitude of styles of writing for achieving the greatest accuracy. Finding the most accurate style of writing for a particular purpose sometimes implies letting go of a seemingly neutral style of writing, instead embracing a plurality of voices, such as staging a dialogue or exploring a more poetic style.

In this introductory workshop spread over two sessions, we practice writing scenesworking with sensory details, defining the main characters driving the story of our work, and staging conversations between them. All sessions are designed around sample texts, and include on-the-spot writing exercises. There will be time for peer-review, and we will take time to reflect on what it takes to make space for creativity within our academic work.

A few places are still available for this upcoming workshop taking place on 8 and 15 June, 10.00 – 13.30 CEST. Book yourself in!

What people say about it:

I tried a few similar workshops recently, and I find Marie’s ones by far the best: they are not only extremely helpful but also a pleasure to do.

Chiara, associate professor

This course has inspired me to develop my own writing style in my papers. It helped me to be creative and productive (for it makes one want to write!), and it has given me perspective regarding the use of poetic, experiential and metaphorical language in crafting academic texts.

Rodante, PhD candidate

Resorting to our body feelings and sensations, bringing them to our awareness while entering a scholarly conversation, opens up a spectrum of alternatives to engage in discussion. Thank you for your expert guidance, so human, that allowed me to feel at ease while exploring “the feeling” of theoretical argumentation. Your workshop contributes to awareness in academic writing, to taking responsibility for choices, to freedom, to integrity. A real eye opener.

Marina, PhD candidate

Marie’s expertise lies in the fact that she used to be a highly successful academic, and is now both an inspired writer and a gifted teacher. This combination is what makes her creative writing for academics courses so inspiring!

Ida, PhD candidate

I’m grateful for participating in Marie’s workshops. The creative writing sessions have helped me enter the scenes of my research, and to shape these worlds while I write with all my senses. Marie’s prompts facilitate a somatic opening for engaging with my data in ways that my whole body is there; writing-as-inquiry from this space enhances fieldwork memory, feelings, creativity, and clarity. It has been a joyful experience to learn on-the-spot techniques for doing this. After these sessions, I wanted to keep writing! Thank you Marie for sharing your gifts with us. 

Nadia, PhD researcher

It’s spring! Perfect time to listen to my poem “Ode to the Eggs”

Find the text of the poem below.
 Ode to the eggs
             after Pablo Neruda
  
 Fields,
 beaches,
 ponds,
 and trees
 sing
 as you
 fall
 on twigs
 and bridles,
 feathers,
 moss,
 sludge,
 and sandbanks.
 You hug
 in groups
 of seven,
 thirteen,
 or fifty-three.
 Fragile
 and immobile,
 you lie
 side by side,
 defying
 your
 hungry
 predators.
 Brown
 patches
 or turquoise
 patterns
 become
 a soft
 embrace,
 an act
 of camouflage
 that protects
 your
 burgeons
 of life
 from
 our greedy
 hands
 and
 growling
 stomachs—
 nothing
 can stop
 our appetite
 for
 the
 vital
 protein
 running
 inside
 the elliptical
 shape
 of your chalky
 beige
 shells.
 In the protected
 space
 of your
 nesting
 nature,
 your viscous
 substance
 creates—
 a
 beating
 heart,
 followed
 by
 blood
 vessels,
 a tail bud,
 wings and legs,
 eyes,
 brains,
 beaks and claws,
 feathers and scales.
 After days
 or weeks
 or months,
 you crack—
 in the fields,
 and in the trees,
 on beaches
 and in the reeds,
 creatures
 crawl,
 squawk
 and walk
 tasting
 the air
 and the
 nourishing
 juice
 of
 food.
 Now
 rack
 and ruin
 you stay
 behind
 as little
 dirty
 white dots,
 composing
 compost,
 sand
 and soil.
 Carried
 along by
 flowing
 water,
 you become
 fertile
 ground,
 sediments,
 and the source
 of a new
 cycle
 of
 life.

L’amour, c’est de ne pas avoir peur du vide, d’oser entrer dans le néant. L’amour, c’est ce moment d’écriture engagée dans le temps. Certains l’appellent écriture automatique.

L’amour, c’est de ne pas avoir peur du vide, d’oser entrer dans le néant. L’amour, c’est ce moment d’écriture engagée dans le temps. Certains l’appellent écriture automatique.

Image: Autonomous artists anonymous

« Donne-moi ta plume pour écrire un mot. » La générosité de cette comptine est peut-être au centre de l’activité de l’écrivain.e. Parfois, on a besoin de la plume d’un.e autre pour pouvoir écrire. Ou tout du moins, on croit avoir besoin de la plume d’un.e autre pour pouvoir écrire. Mais finalement, ce n’est pas la plume que l’on trouve, mais un cœur à qui se confier, une âme sœur peut-être. L’écriture s’arrête alors pour le moment d’un câlin. Ce qui reste c’est une connivence, un moment de partage. La porte s’est refermée, on ne les voit plus. Ce que l’on peut voir, c’est notre imagination. Deux corps qui s’étreignent, deux souffles qui mergent en un souffle pour le moment de l’étreinte. Un sourire qui nait, un soupir qui souffle les heures, les jours, les semaines d’angoisse emmagasinées dans le corps, là, juste au dessous du plexus solaire. Ce sont des choses banales, mais même les choses banales se transforment en tension. Le pain trop dur trouvé au petit matin. Le thé tiède. L’eau qui ne chauffe pas, ou qui est trop chaude et brule le bout de mes doigts. Le rythme de la langue qui tremble et qui claque, qui s’élance et se cramponne au dernier morceau de ligne, au dernier son de la tirade à peine entamée. Qu’est-ce qui pourrait apporter de la joie dans ce cocktail de détails oubliés sur le rebord de la fenêtre ? J’entends la voix de Christian Bobin interjeter le texte. « L’amour, c’est un morceau de soleil oublié sur un mur, c’est un fantôme en robe bleue. » L’amour, c’est un éclair qui caresse la peau. L’amour, c’est une étreinte qui ne serre pas. L’amour, c’est le coup de marteau qui nous révèle un monde juste à porté de main, jusque là caché par un rideau d’inquiétudes. L’amour, c’est l’endurance de la dance, la sueur de la valse qui n’en finit pas de tourner. L’amour, c’est le son qui s’estompe pour se transformer en vibrations internes. Ces vibrations qui révèlent le cœur sous la poitrine, qui éveillent un frisson oublié au coin d’une côte brisée. L’amour, c’est l’envie d’en faire encore un peu plus, le monde n’est jamais trop plein d’histoires, il en faut toujours plus pour révéler nos vies et nos destins. L’amour, c’est de ne pas avoir peur du vide, d’oser entrer dans le néant. L’amour, c’est ce moment d’écriture engagée dans le temps. Certains l’appellent écriture automatique, moi je l’appelle écriture créative. Écriture tout court, parce que finalement, écrire, c’est écouter son cœur, c’est-à-dire, écouter les vibrations de mes os qui se mettent à chanter. Mes os se sont mit à chanter par un samedi après- midi brumeux. Je marchais sur la route, portant mon poids en traversant la rivière, tombant sur les pierres. Leur chant se mit à gonfler comme une éponge, absorbant le sol, épongeant le flot, transformant le vent qui tombait sur les arbres de ma trachée…C’est un de mes poèmes qui résonne ici. Écoutez-le en entier, c’est par ici.

La terre d’automne est noire, mais nos os sont blancs. Je les entends chanter quand je cours dans le vent

 Nos os se mirent à chanter par un samedi matin embrumé.
 Nous étions sur la route, portant notre poids au-delà de la rivière, tombant sur les pierres. 
  
 Leur chant se mit à gonfler comme une éponge absorbant le sol, aspirant
 le flot, transportant 
 les airs, transformant 
 le vent qui tombait
 sur les branches
 de notre trachée.
  
 Nos os, invisibles à nos yeux, jusqu’à ce que
  
 nous tombions
  
 brisés.
  
 Nos os libérés, nous ne savons plus
 où mettre nos pieds, à qui tenir la main, où poser notre dos
 où se reposer. 
  
 Mais il nous reste l’eau. Elle s’écoule sous notre peau,
 transportant le sel alluvion de tristesse,
 elle vient toucher le rebord sculpté de nos yeux. 
  
 Une larme
 coule. 
  
 Une larme
 sèche.
  
 Trace blanche sédimentaire 
 se souvenant du sol, nos os se mettent à bouger, lentement,
 plus      lent       que      le      soleil       qui    se     lève     à           l’horizon. 
  
 Personne ne les vit bouger, pourtant ils portaient notre image, 
 émergeant dans la brume, ils frappèrent aux carreaux.
  
 Aucun son
  
 n’apparut.  
  
 Nos os se mettent à chanter observant l’intérieur,
 alors que nous dormons, ils suivent les courbes et les lignes
 réconciliant les parts de notre corps brisé.
  
 Nous posons nos pieds nus sur le sol dur et froid,
 et frottons notre dos avec la palme de nos mains.
  
 La fenêtre était ouverte au réveil ce matin.
  
  
 Marie Beauchamps ©2020 

Creative Writing Workshop for Academics: Using Creative Writing as a Tool in Academic Writing

January 19, 2021 10.00 -17.00 (Amsterdam time, UTC +1), on zoom.

Workshop animated by Marie Beauchamps (Marie Skłodowska-Curie postdoc fellow, Queen Mary University of London).

This workshop makes space to explore a diverse and creative pallet of writing styles in academic writing practices.

The choices we make when we write have profound effects on the reality that we observe. Giving an account of our observations requires a multitude of styles of writing for achieving the greatest accuracy. Finding the most accurate style of writing for a particular purpose sometimes implies letting go of a seemingly neutral style of writing, instead embracing a plurality of voices, such as staging a dialogue or exploring a more poetic style. This workshop aims to explore what happens when we loosen up the frame of our habitual academic writing practice, inviting multi-layered stories to bubble up and become part of the conversation unfolding on the page.

In this one-day, interactive workshop, I will lead you through a series of hands on exercises to make you experience creative writing within your academic practice. You will practice writing scenes, working with sensory details, defining the main characters driving the story of your work, and staging conversations between them. There will be time for peer-review, and we will take time to reflect on what it takes to make space for creativity within our academic work.  

Practicalities:

  • The workshop is by now fully booked. I will develop more of these in the future, in different formats. If you are interested to receive future communication about future workshops, please leave your details here: https://forms.gle/TKayfMMo7AjqguYq6.
  • Space is limited due to the interactive nature of the workshop. I’m working on adding extra dates in the future. Information will follow in due time. You can leave your contact details via the link above to receive information.
  • A zoom link will be sent to registered participants in advance of the workshop.
  • Participants are asked to bring a text to work on. It can be an outline, a very first draft, a finished article, or everything in-between, as long as you feel comfortable working with it for the time of the workshop.

If you want to join but cannot attend the full day, please contact me (m.beauchamps@qmul.ac.uk) to discuss alternatives.

Requiem for old souls

While I stand on the hill, the sky grows clear
Above the village the milky way shines
The trees are pitch black against the bright lines
The mountain softens, shadows walking near.
In the distance I see a cat approaching
Wild like a tiger, an enormous monster
It roars and it runs; it is my sister      
Free like a river, untamed and flowing.
 
Against the cold rock, I feel my limbs and heart
The blood rushing deep, moving through my spine
My bones connected to earlier times
Where ancestors rest, rest their souls and art
Autumn soils are black, and their bones were white
I hear them singing walking through the night.


                                   London, November 2020. 
                                   Marie Beauchamps ©

Photograph: Bart Koetsier ©